Monday, August 06, 2007

Mock Turtle Neck Soup


Stolen Lilies

A slipping away day on the lake.
Molasses swell and fold,
how drift dreamy I am,
dragonflies tandem skim,
Mom says they love each other.
Bullfrogs mudded in,
snakes parting cattails like combs,
the wind flits like things I knew.
I haven’t remembered she’s dying all day.

My pirate paddle ship
sips along for me, slick privateer,
trimming into the hidden cove.
My schemes include contraband lilies.
Illegal for pluck.
I see one deep in,
like a nest of doves’ wings.
No fish and game boats near,
I slide across this dark wax floor.

Then I see it.
A turtle sleeped in the day’s oven,
perched on a log next to my lily.
Quick I ghost,
leaning my length over the bow,
steer the tiller with toes,
stretch out toward the Paint,
eyes open, frantic claws, lunge, breath,
He and I tip...
we’ve got each other.

In the drip splattered boat,
I see his shell is beautiful,
skin streaked warpaint orange.
But turned over – Sick. Leeched.
Open wounds under their acid maws.
Bloodrobbers.

Only now I know why this next happened.
Wild I scratch, dig, rake and raw at them,
pinch and slash, exhale, and boom against,
when they fall on me they latch
but I drag at my skin, evict and bludgeon,
I clean us both to shreds.

It is days later
I find one leech shriveled
in the folds of the lily
in my Mother’s vase.

5 comments:

  1. this had me riveted. I guess it works very well.

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  2. Thanks, dude. I posted a first draft. I might make some small edits in the next few days. I'm working in some new rhythms and trying out new things.

    And you can see by my last two poems I have a theme I'm working around. It might be the focus of my book.

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  3. I love the first and last part, J. It's softly summery, then blood? Hard to do without cliches. Nice work. Rhythms and images fit so well. A few too many words in the middle that you'll catch in your rewrite... Cancer attached to beauty beaucoup subtle. (Hope to see you soon.)

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  4. I will be first in line to buy said book James. This poem was stunning. A great choice of theme, and as seen by these two showings, you are tackling the subject with soft but pointed hands.

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  5. I've made some edits. Pare and slice. That's my way. Later comes full butchery. I declare war on articles first then replace verbs.

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